HUMARE DOSTE PHULO KE TARHA NA HO,
JO EK BAR KILE OUR MURJAH JAYE,
BALKE KANTO KE TARHA HO JE EK BAR CHUBHE ,TO DO BAR YAAD AYE………..
We started to pursue our dreams together. We started to follow our common path and he took lead and left me behind. Well no worries I don't care about what he does. But there is only one thing which reminds me and that is his poetry and story telling ability.
He used to sing poetry and beleive me I used to find every reason to stop him or tried to pretend I'm lsitening but inside my mind I would somewhere else. But then He wrote one beautiful lines.
"Sar kar liya jinna rava nu, ajj dil ohna toh hataash hai"
"Menu ajj fer ik navi manzil dee talash hai"
That day a new refined poet born and he never looked back. I salute to his poetry. I wish I could write like him well I have tried to immitate his story telling skills.
Here is the link to his blog:-
http://mycreativeinside.blogspot.com
3 comments:
This is nice description i think. But i think there is nothing like, i left u behind. We had started dreaming together, still running on a same pace, may be path i different.
Thanks for polishing my art and giving some mind food.
2 people da ki competition ho sakda hai. Vakiya hi koyi agey lang gaya hai because us kol jyada hunar hi nai hai par usda path vi correct hai. Jes ney jagdeya akha de dreams laye si usde hi poore honge kuj people tan duje dey dreams nu dhaka naal aavda keh hi kush hunde ha. Dosti di gal to jyada ethey kandeya di peed lagdi hai.
ths is vry refine intro of gUri... he deserve ths bt u'r hvg diff skills & both of ur creativities cnt b compared....
u both hv diff. creative skills....
bt bth r artists in your own way'
its good 2 b ur frnd
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